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Broken Promise in the Rain by ~MyLifeInShadows:iconMyLifeInShadows:



The coldness in the tears
The freezing in the rain
I’m alone and I know it
My heart has become ice
Even my darkness knows it,
It leaves me alone in despair
I’m alone

The one thing I love about the rain…
Nobody can see me cry

I’ll try my best to stay around
I’ll wait for you to come
I’ll try to wait a little longer
And pray for your return

I’ve waited in this dampness
To long in my sorrow
I love you, but I don’t know if you love me anymore
I’m going to walk away,
But it hurts so much with every step

My icy heart is broken
I thought you would be there, but you weren’t

It’s not the first of lies for me
I know when to be disappointed, sad, and in misery
You lied before, like so many others

Maybe what they said was true
That I’ll never find a lover, to call upon someone as my own
I wish that was the lie

Love for me was here and gone
I’ll stop trying, I’ll stop calling, and I’ll stop praying
I’m nothing to you, but a faded memory.
©2008-2009 ~MyLifeInShadows
:iconmylifeinshadows:

Author's Comments

I pretty much based this on Frak's life so yeah.....

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:iconelflordtim:
Wow. This poem was...really good. It was so...wow.

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I'm just speaking from experience: nothing can compare to your first true love. So, I hope this will remind you when it's for real it's forever so don't forget about us.
:iconomgimtrappedinabox:
... I love it!

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The truth lies in darkness.
:iconmylifeinshadows:
Thanks =) even though the poem is sad.
:iconelflordtim:
It's sad, but it's really really good. Made me all sad, haha.

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I'm just speaking from experience: nothing can compare to your first true love. So, I hope this will remind you when it's for real it's forever so don't forget about us.
:iconrebi624:
so beautifully sad...
i can relate to this poem :( my icy heart was broken...

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I\'m your biggest fan
I\'ll follow you until you love me, Papa-paparazzi,
Baby there\'s no other superstar you know that i\'ll be your
Papa-paparazzi...

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